Lewis on knowing one's evidence
Here is Lewis's 1996 analysis of knowledge:
S knows proposition P iff P holds in every possibility left uneliminated by S's evidence. ("Elusive Knowledge", p.422 in Papers)
By evidence, Lewis explains, he means perceptual experiences and memories; a possibility W counts as eliminated iff the subject does not have the same evidence in W: "When perceptual experience E (or memory) eliminates a possibility W [...], W is a possibility in which the subject is not having experience E" (424). It follows that everyone trivially knows what perceptual experiences they have: In every possibility W in which I have experience E, I obviously have experience E.
However, at other places Lewis tells us that experiences are brain states, or physical properties thereof. The possibilities left uneliminated by my evidence would therefore be possibilities in which I'm in the same brain state. If that's true, I can knowledgeably rule out many skeptical alternatives, e.g. where I don't have a brain. And I can rule out various seemingly open biological possibilities, where I'm in a brain state other than E.
That's not very plausible. Indeed, in his mind papers, Lewis commonly rejects the assumption -- which he calls the 'Identification Thesis' -- that we normally know what experiences we have: "Making discoveries in neurophysiology is not so easy!" ("Should...?", p.329 in Papers).
What's going on here? It seems that in "Elusive Knowledge", Lewis means something else by "experience" than in his mind papers, even in those written at around the same time ("Should...?" and "Reduction..."). But what does he mean?
The best candidate, I think, is the higher-level role property that defines, say, a perceptual experience of such-and-such type. The uneliminated possibilities then are possibilities where I am in some state or other that plays the relevant causal role. Thus the possibilities I can rule out for certain are possibilities where there is no causation, or where folk psychology is radically false. It still seems a bit strange that any kind of experience gives me perfect, indefeasible knowledge of those matters. Moreover, this causal-role evidence doesn't go very well with Lewis's remark in "Elusive Knowledge" (p.424) that we need not assume our evidence can be expressed in words, and hence need not look for a "pure sense-datum language": the folk psychological roles probably aren't too hard to express, and anyway won't look much like sense-datum language.
So I'm not sure.
As I read "Elusive Knowledge," perceptual experience and memory are individuated by their content. That is, worlds in which it does not perceptually appear to me that there is a table in front of me are eliminated, and worlds in which I do not seem to remember that I had cereal for breakfast are eliminated. (Of course, worlds in which it false that there is a table in front of me, or that I had cereal for breakfast, are not thereby eliminated.)
The content can be modelled as a class of centered possible worlds. There need not be any sentence in one's language that expresses that self-locating proposition.
It is then a consequence of Lewis's account of knowledge that we always know what the content of our perception and memory is. Many externalists would of course find that objectionable, but Lewis had independent reasons to to posit an internalist, narrow kind of content.
If some sort of functionalism is assumed to be necessarily true, then there is not much to choose between that reading and yours. A world in which it perceptually appears that p will be a world where I am in such-and-such causal/functional state. Assuming the necessity of functionalist analyses (I don't know whether Lewis was committed to that), I think your criticism stands: Lewis's account falsely implies that we have knowledge about our causal organization from the armchair (in fact, even those of us who say that they do not believe in functionalism!). An account that entails modal omniscience seems especially problematic if it also entails omniscience about one's intentional content.